For this week's blog post, I have decided to upload another part of the book my sister and I are writing. The excerpt is from the viewpoint of another character, so don't get confused.
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school has provided an air conditioned coach bus to take us to camp. It is
somewhere in the northern part of our home state, Minnesota. Everyone around me
is discussing unnecessary topics, such as professional sports, fashion, and
celebrities. Some have degraded themselves even further and have decided to
gossip about others. I am truly disgusted.
I, on the other hand, have
intelligently chosen to study for the upcoming ACT exam. Though I am only in
eighth grade, I am determined to acquire a perfect score. Harvard will not
accept near-perfect. It will only accept the best of the best, which I’m
quite sure I am. My father attended that university, so the proverbial bar is
set higher. Of course, Harvard is not the only option. I am also looking into
Yale, Princeton, Dartmouth, Cornell, Columbia, Brown, and the University of
Pennsylvania. Though the Ivy Leagues seem in clear view, I will also be content
in other prestigious universities, such as Stanford and Rice, the latter of which
my mother attended.
“He’s
such a nerd!” I hear a few girls gossiping about me.
I am quick to sophisticatedly
retaliate. “I do not care about your invalid opinions. They are produced by
minds that are incapable of even the most basic things. Please keep your
undesirable words to yourself.”
They do not say anything more about
me.
I continue to study. I have taken an
ACT practice exam, timing myself using my watch. I have come very close to a
perfect score, receiving a 33 out of 36. The loss of three points was most
likely due to the irritating jabber of the people around me. I should have
brought earplugs.
After another hour or so, we stop at
a grassy area to eat lunch. As we get out of the bus, we are handed a box
containing our lunch. I sit fairly close to a group of boys with passable IQs.
They do not notice me, and I am happy for it, as I must reflect on my ACT
practice test score. It is far too important.
I open the box and find that my lunch is a turkey sandwich, potato
chips, and a juice box. So much studying and perfection has made me hungry, so
I relish my meal. The turkey blends perfectly with the tomatoes, lettuce, and
wheat bread. The chips are greasy and full of saturated fats, but everyone must
indulge themselves from time to time. I complete the rest of my food and throw
my garbage into a nearby trash can. As I am walking back, I hear a beep. I turn
around and find out that it is Marcus, a boy in my class who is blind.
“Sorry,” Marcus apologizes. He uses
a beeping cane to manoeuvre around me. His friends, Fred and Jack, are a few
steps behind him.
“It’s fine,” I respond. Marcus
invites me to sit with him and his friends. I enjoy my introversion, but I
decide to take the offer.
“So...” Jack starts when I sit down.
“What’s up?”
“Nothing,” I respond. “I was
reflecting upon my ACT practice test score. I did not perform at quite the
level I would have liked.”
“Isn’t this camp supposed to be a
break from school?” Fred asks.
I look at him incredulously. “This
is not schoolwork. Our school’s education system is much too mediocre to
prepare us for prestigious exams such as the ACT.”
“Don’t you want a break from studying?”
Jack interrogates.
“Never lose the opportunity to
expand your field of knowledge. Besides, studying brings me joy.”
“Don’t you ever want to try
something new?” Marcus questions.
“Yes. I read different books, try
different math problems, and learn different concepts in science.”
“I meant something other than
studying. Have you ever tried sports?” Fred asks.
“No. I exercise my mind. Sports are
a pointless waste of time with no objective.”
“You try to win,” Marcus points out.
“That’s an objective.”
“But what do you do with that
objective? Winning some silly sports competition won’t get you into Harvard or
Yale. Very few people play well enough to earn athletic scholarships. And let’s
say you do play professionally. Your career will end by the time you’re 30, as
that’s when your bones start to weaken.” I am making excellent points.
“However, if you are a doctor, lawyer, or engineer, you can have a career for
the rest of your life, earn respect, and make a decent living.”
“It’s not about college. Sports are
something you can do for fun. What about video games? Or music?” Jack asks.
“Video games kill brain cells.
Music, however, is in my field of interest. I do study the great composers.”
“I think you should do something
that doesn’t involve studying,” Fred explains.
“Thank you for the suggestion, but I
will stick to my strong suits.”
“Ok,” Jack says, obviously unable to
come up with anything else. “Um...we need to go. I think someone was calling
us, so we’ll catch you later.”
The three of them leave, and I am
left to reflect on various ACT questions. Just when I thought I was in
solitude, I hear two brown-haired boys approaching my area. I recognize the
shorter one as Miguel, a boy from my class, and the other as Justin, who is in
a different class.
“Did you see that chick?” Justin
asks Miguel.
“The blonde? Yeah.”
“Damn, she was hot.”
“Ok, one to ten. What would you give
her?” Miguel questions.
“I’d say nine. How ’bout you?”
“Maybe a six.”
“Six?! That’s all?” Justin looks
aghast.
“What? She’s not that hot.”
This is an ungodly conversation. I
try to tune them out.
“I know who you think is hot. Everyone
does,” Justin teases.
“She doesn’t know,” Miguel says,
obviously referring to the girl he is infatuated with. “I think.”
“I can always tell her. You know, so
she’s prepared. Otherwise she’ll slap the heck out of you if you try to pull
any moves on her.”
“I’m not pulling moves on anyone,
Justin,” Miguel explains. “I’m just planning on asking her to the school dance
at the end of the year.”
“Yeah, and then you’re going to use
your Latin lover boy moves on her.”
“I don’t have a death wish, idiot.”
This is disgraceful. I can no longer
endure such torture.
“Shut your mouths!” I scream. “This
is inappropriate. Such discussions should not be allowed in public. You should
be ashamed of yourselves! Please remove yourselves from my field of vision.”
Justin looks like he wants to spit
at me. “Dude, you have problems. You need help.”
Miguel shares a similar countenance.
“Yeah. I don’t know what the hell is going on with you.”
Justin makes a profane gesture at me
and the two walk away. Good. I have rid myself of their presence. I don’t know
how I will be able to live through such horrible conversations at camp.
Once we are back on the bus, I open
my ACT book and study the science section. Thoroughly intrigued by the many
techniques offered, I choose to ignore the tap on my shoulder.
“Hello?” I know that voice. It’s
Mali.
“What?” I ask, continuing to read.
“Can you look at me when you’re
talking to me?”
I close my book and make eye
contact. “What do you need? As you can see, I’m studying.”
“That’s what I want to talk to you
about. Why don’t you ever do anything else? Don’t you get bored of studying?”
I shake my head. “Studying
stimulates and enriches the mind. It prepares us for college and the real
world.”
Mali rolls her eyes. “The problems
you’re going to face in life aren’t in that textbook, Sam. Don’t you think
you’re smart enough, anyway? Don’t you ever want to have fun?”
“Studying is enjoyable. And I may be
intelligent, but there is a higher level of perfection that I wish to achieve.”
“You are so full of yourself! When I
tied with you in the Brain Bowl, you acted like it was such a big surprise.
Just because you’re smart does not make you better than everyone else! You
might be good at math and all that stuff, but that’s it. I don’t know why I
tried talking to you.”
“Ok. Now would you please leave me
to my studying?”
Mali does not talk to me at all
after that encounter.
After about 20 minutes, the bus goes
through a tunnel. People all around me are holding their breaths. This is most
likely some silly superstition, so I obviously do not participate. When we are
out of the tunnel, everyone acts like they haven’t breathed in years. I am
disgusted by their childish games. Even the teachers participate. I do not
understand why they degrade themselves in such a manner.
I am still studying when a girl
requests we watch a movie. Mr. Rice, the health teacher, reads off a few names
of films. Everyone chooses a movie that I have never heard of, but apparently
has some heartthrob actor. I decide to take a short break from my studying to
watch it.
Throughout the movie, girls get
excited when the actor comes onscreen. It is some sort of action-romance film,
and I must admit the special effects are spectacular. The acting and storyline,
however, are absolutely dreadful. In the
end, there is a kissing scene with buildings blowing up in the background.
Overall, I am unimpressed.
Mr. Rice, who is now sitting behind
me, decides to strike up a conversation. “What did you think of the movie?”
“The special effects were quite
impressive, but I did not approve of the movie in general.”
“You didn’t like the story?”
“Not at all. It was very
unrealistic.”
“Oh. Well, that’s too bad. Maybe we
can find something you’ll like on the way back.”
I nod. However, I don’t think the
majority of people would agree with my taste in entertainment.
After about an hour, we reach a long
string of wooden-cabin-like dorms. They are located in front of a thicket of
trees. At the door, we check in and collect our room keys. I am given the room
B6. Due to a limited number of rooms, each dorm will house four pupils. I cross
my fingers that my roommates will be somewhat intelligent.
I walk into the hall, which has
three wooden tables. It is extremely spacious, and the blue paint on the walls
gives it an even more open feel. The girls’ wing is on the right, so I walk
over to the left. Once I find my room number, I unlock the door and find Henry,
Miguel, and Carl. There are two sets of bunk beds, and the only space left is
the lower bunk under Miguel. There is a large window behind the beds to let the
morning light in. The carpet is so flat it feels almost hard. I am disgusted to
be left with Miguel. Henry, who is in my class, is a decent person, but not
necessarily someone I would talk to. Carl is in a different class, and I
honestly don’t know him well enough to even come up with a judgement. This is
going to be an interesting experience.
This is such brilliant writing!!! How beautiful!!! This should win an award!!!
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